[NTRD-124]

Netorareze: The Story of a Mature Private Tutor's Wife Stolen by a Senior Gentleman on His 60th Birthday Risa Tsukitsu

It has been three years since I married my wife. Back then, my income was stable, so I had no hesitation in letting her become a full-time housewife. However, we couldn't seem to have children, and she spent each day with nothing to do. By chance, she discovered a job as an "adult private tutor." Having worked as a cram school teacher before marriage, she decided to give it a try. Normally, tutors visit the student's home, but at my wife's request—since she didn't want her grandson to see her studying—we arranged for the lessons to take place at our house. The student was a kind, friendly older man who appeared to be past retirement age. Polite, humble, and diligently studying, his attitude made my wife start feeling a sense of purpose in her work. But one day, I witnessed an unbelievable scene. The man was as courteous, humble, and serious as ever—but he was naked, passionately embracing my wife...

鬱になるわ 寝取りというジャンルだから当然の展開ではあるけど、もっと彼女が抵抗するシーンが欲しかった。例えば、彼女が少しでも意識を保っていて、内心で戸惑ったり、不安になったりする描写がもっとあってもよかった。そうすれば、よりリアルで感情の揺らぎが伝わってきて、見ている側ももっと引き込まれた気がする。現状ではちょっと物足りなさを感じてしまう。 夫との会話のシーンを差し込むのはやめてくれ 本番シーンが頻繁に挿入されると、流れに邪魔になる感じがする。映画やドラマのようにストーリーを楽しむのではなく、アダルト作品としての純粋な楽しみを妨げる。会話シーンも必要なら、それほど多く入れる必要がない気がする。全体のバランスが崩れてしまって、かえって退屈になる場合もある。